The Hatter - Comments

I'm here as the new judge of the Fairy Tale Contest!

I loved the twist at the end with The Hatter knocking Alice out with whatever was in the drink! You can tell he cares for her in his own strange way and I really loved that about this. The dialogue heavily reminded me of the movie which was a great touch because it flowed so naturally. Well done!

@ Sailor Moon.
Thank you

UGHH!! I love this! The dark, creepy vibe near the ending is a nice touch. I love how Alice doesn't want to offend the Hatter, too. Very nicely written

@ RoCk_PrInCeSs_PR
I saw him as an unaware psycho. But maybe that's just because I adore him so much haha
Thank you! :)

I love this story. It feels very dark and somehow a bit creepy because of the way it ended. I see him like some sort of sociopath? or psycho? I don't know which is the right word but I absolutely loved it. I'm also a fan of the movies and I haven't read the books but I believe that you made a unique plot by making him different than he is from the original story. I really like your writing style and I think this was a great story. Maybe this story wouldn't work as a chapter story but the concept is definitely interesting as to keep reading about it even if that means in an other story.
Great job!

@ mpbp2008
Thank you very much! But I don't think I could make this work as a chaptered story.

I love this and would really look forward to a continuation!