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  • scarhead4

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    Thank you so much for the comment and I'm glad you like it, keep checking on it cause I'll be adding more chapters. :) thank you again
    May 7th, 2014 at 05:40am
  • DustyMoose

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    You use a lot of detail, which I like. But what I really like is that you dont give away completely whats happening right away, so when the true events are revealed it keeps it interesting and thrilling.
    Cool cats Cool
    May 5th, 2014 at 07:28pm
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