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  • shortygirl

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    There's gonna be lots of drama if Sam and Dean show up with Bobbie's dad around.
    April 24th, 2015 at 08:43am
  • simply amanda;

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    I really like this story, a lot! Mr. Green
    July 5th, 2014 at 03:16am
  • Nightmaire

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    This has the start of a good story. The main thing that I would suggest is just a little bit more detail in the next chapters. I know that drama is coming, no story lives without drama. Just a little bit more detail, like what the FBI uniforms look like, what weapons everyone has, and so on. -Cami
    May 16th, 2014 at 07:17am
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