Cigarette Stains - Comments

Rockabella (200)

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@ Halloweenlover
Thanks so much!

October 8th, 2014 at 02:06am

Halloweenlover (100)

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Candy bowl! I loved this story! Chapter 1 was great, but chapter two introduced another character and I already like Casey. :) I love how Lanie's past is hinted at, but not fully exposed. It is intriguing and makes you want to read more. At least I want to read more! Lol. Please continue this. Oh and I'm subscribing and recommending. I know I just needed to comment, but this is a good story! :)

October 8th, 2014 at 01:10am

Rockabella (200)

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@ MCRLUCY
Thanks so much :)

May 23rd, 2014 at 04:57pm

MCRLUCY (100)

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Wow. This is a perfect first chapter. Extremely well written. Good set up and a great, suspenseful ending which hooks us in so that we really do NEED to read more. Great work. Keep it up. I look forward to reading more.

May 23rd, 2014 at 03:45pm