July 17th, 2014 at 12:13pm
Trying to Grow Strong - Comments
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Yay, Robb's arrived! I can't wait to see how you tie him into the story July 1st, 2014 at 05:29am
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Yay, Robb's arrived! I can't wait to see how you tie him into the story July 1st, 2014 at 05:20am
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@ LilacFairy-Chu
Thank you! Your comment means a lot!
@ oberyn.angel
I really enjoy your comments, haha I just love ready them because I like knowing what you thought of the chapter!
I'm sorry i didn't update last week! But I'll try and update this week! I might even update twice!June 16th, 2014 at 10:10pm -
I like how you've introduced another religion, and I wonder how this will play out in your story. I also wonder if her nightmare was the future, and if so why she was able to see that. Like I said previously, it seems like you're setting up this story well. I hope to see another update soon! June 8th, 2014 at 04:44am
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Hey I really hope you can continue I would love to read more!June 2nd, 2014 at 03:07pm
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It sounds interesting, and seems like you're setting up for a lot of drama to follow! I'm interested in reading more and seeing where you take this story! June 2nd, 2014 at 04:20am
I really loved the passage in the first chapter about her being a fish with flowered scales, that was just ugh, so excellent! Such a play on words. I really liked that crystal you described aswell.
I'm also really curious about the new god you've introduced, that's a really bold move and I must say you pulled it off so well. It actually seemed like it was a real god from that time.
The purple eye's really have me interested aswell, and the red woman being apart of her dreams.
I really have to say, your writing is great, but the thing that really caught me with this story is all the little details you put in. The symbolism seems to run strong in this story, and I really can't wait to see what's coming next!