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  • mrsmshadz

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    Omfg!!! I Can't believe I missed 3 updates!!! I don't even fucken know how!!! Ugh, anyways they were good!!! I'm glad that asshole got what he deserved!!! I can't wait for the next update!!!!
    October 22nd, 2014 at 07:50am
  • OMFGitsBeckiie

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    You're evil for leaving off with a cliffhanger! Lo . I'm soooo interested in this twist you have planned! And I'm so happy Matt and Haven are being more than civil with each other. More please!
    October 22nd, 2014 at 07:32am
  • Lalaster

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    Thank you all so much!
    I can't wait to reveal it to you. :)
    I've updated, but the big reveal will be in the next chapter. :)
    October 22nd, 2014 at 06:50am
  • OMFGitsBeckiie

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    I'm not sure why, but for some reason the thought of Officer Ridge being a 'victim' to Havens crimes popped in my head before anything else. I'm probably wrong but its early for me and that's what came to mind lol. or, maybe officer petty raped Ridge too. I loved the chapter! Please update soon :D
    October 21st, 2014 at 09:44pm
  • simply amanda;

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    I wanna know so bad why she's being nice. I think she's either there to take them out. Or she's crooked cop. Either way I can't wait for the next update. So please update as soon as you can. I loved all the updates. I really loved when Matt got at Officer Petty I wished he'd killed him but that'd been too good for his sorry sacky shitty ass. Lol. Update soon!!!!
    October 21st, 2014 at 08:20pm
  • AJ9

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    I haven't figured out the twist but I'm really eager to find out. Did Petty do the same to her, perhaps? Hmmm ....

    Please update again soon. xxx
    October 21st, 2014 at 12:05pm
  • Lalaster

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    It's updated!
    Thank you all for commenting!
    You all mean so much to me:)
    I hope that I didn't confuse anyone too much.
    There will be a huge twist coming up soon!!
    Just lettin' y'all know. ;)
    October 21st, 2014 at 07:21am
  • OMFGitsBeckiie

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    Mad Dog is a beast, man. I hope Officer Petty gets what he deserves. I also hope that Haven opens up to Matt a little more. I can't wait for more!
    October 20th, 2014 at 10:08pm
  • RavenArtist93

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    Damn I am getting so hooked!!
    It just gets more 'on-the-edge-of-your-seat' suspenseful with what the hell is going to happen D:
    Seriously woman,
    Now I'm fully addicted and need more! Lol
    Loving this so much <3
    I hope that Officer Douchebag gets castrated and beaten by Matt...oh how I would love to see that.
    Because shit,
    It hurts to see Haven this broken, a sight I never thought I would see/read :(
    October 20th, 2014 at 05:32pm
  • AJ9

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    I'm Hoping Officer Fuckface gets a right, royal beating and suitable follow up "punishment" for what he did to poor Haven. Please update again soon. xxx
    October 20th, 2014 at 05:04pm
  • Lalaster

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    Thank you for commenting. I've updated again tonight!

    Oh I promise you that officer is going to get what's coming to him in time. :)
    October 20th, 2014 at 07:58am
  • mrsmshadz

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    Yes!! So what's going to happen now?? I hope that officer gets fired.
    October 20th, 2014 at 06:58am
  • Lalaster

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    Thank you all so much for commenting!
    You made my day every time that I read your comments! :)
    I have updated, and I'm currently working on the next update.
    Hug
    October 20th, 2014 at 06:06am
  • mrsmshadz

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    Fucken Brooke!!! Haven should kill her next!!!! Haven must have no fucken soul if being raped multiple times doesn't break her!! Idk what good will come out of it now that Matt knows. Poor Brian I hope he's ok. Too bad he didn't kill Brooke when he had the chance!!! Good updates!!! More!!!! Lol
    October 19th, 2014 at 06:26pm
  • AJ9

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    I get the feeling that Officer Petty will pay the ultimate price for doing that to Haven ...

    Please update again soon. xxx
    October 19th, 2014 at 06:04pm
  • simply amanda;

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    I really hate Lola. She caused Haven to be in the solitary. Stupid witch, lol. I loved this update. Poor Haven for having to endure what that stupid officer done to her. Amazing update honey. I can't wait for more!
    October 19th, 2014 at 04:02pm
  • OMFGitsBeckiie

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    Oh, my word. I hadn't even noticed you updated not once, not twice, but three friggin times! Fuck Officer Petty, man! I hope someone fucks his shit up. And damn it Brooke, fucking sellout. I can't wait for more! Hopefully I'll get to read it before two or three updates come out lol!
    October 19th, 2014 at 03:38pm
  • Finsterella

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    i really hate that officer hes a dick. and i cant believe brooke right now!.... i cant wait to find out what mad dog and matt are thinking. update soon i really loved the chapters!!!
    October 19th, 2014 at 01:13pm
  • Lalaster

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    @ mrsmshadz

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    Thank you both for commenting!
    I've updated again, and plan on updating yet again later tonight.
    I hope that you like this chapter. :)
    October 19th, 2014 at 07:02am
  • simply amanda;

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    Damn that officer was a true and complete ass wipe. I feel so sorry for Haven for having to deal with that. I wished she'd clawed his eyes out or something. Stupid officer. I loved this update and can't wait for more!
    October 18th, 2014 at 02:07pm