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  • mrsmshadz

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    After she kneed him in the balls, she should've dug her fingers into his eyes or bit the shit out of him. Maybe head butt him?? Ugh so many should've, could've, would've!!! Update please!!!
    October 18th, 2014 at 06:26am
  • Lalaster

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    It's been updated, and I'm sorry for the short length!
    The next chapter will be much longer!!

    Thank you all so much for commenting!! :)
    It just makes my day seeing all of your amazing comments. :)
    October 18th, 2014 at 05:51am
  • RavenArtist93

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    Damn this shit is getting intense.
    It makes me wonder the whole "love" thing going on between Matt and Haven and really if it still exists.
    Because its obvious that Haven hates Matt...but the prolonged feelings of him wants to push those negatives and bring back the positives.
    She is a definite badass...but things need to makeup between the two.
    I can't want to know where everything ends up! :)
    October 17th, 2014 at 11:12pm
  • mrsmshadz

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    She's got 30 days in the hole!! Lol loved the update!!
    October 17th, 2014 at 12:45am
  • mrsmshadz

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    She's got 30 days in the hole!! Lol loved the update!!
    October 17th, 2014 at 12:45am
  • simply amanda;

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    Poor Matt. I can't believe his family done that. Disown him because he loves his wife. I mean that's really messed up. I can't wait to see another update honey! I am loving this!
    October 16th, 2014 at 02:08pm
  • Metalwhore

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    Oh wow... I love this!!!
    October 16th, 2014 at 12:25pm
  • Lalaster

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    It's updated!
    Thank you all for your awesome comments! Hug
    October 16th, 2014 at 08:04am
  • simply amanda;

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    I love this, and I am subscribed and recommended. I really can't wait to see more.
    October 15th, 2014 at 03:18am
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    I really like this. I love it actually. Subscribed and recommended. I can't wait to read more.
    October 15th, 2014 at 03:15am
  • Finsterella

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    I love this! Thanks for writing this sequel!! I'm anxious to know how this is going to play out. Update soon!
    October 15th, 2014 at 02:37am
  • RavenArtist93

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    I am just LOVING how you are bringing this out.
    Haven is such a damn badass bitch that it makes me reveal an evil smile Lick
    Things I have a feeling are going to get a bit rough in here,
    But that is what is going to get me excited!
    This is for sure going to be a more cynical version of Orange is the New Black, only with males too LOL
    DARE I SAY IT, MUAHAHA

    P.s:
    I would totally take Matt into the broom closet and get all sexy up in that shit Naughty
    October 14th, 2014 at 04:38pm
  • Lalaster

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    Thank you for commenting. :)
    Yeah, I know this. And, I tried working the story around that way.
    It just didn't work the way I wanted it to.
    And since this is just fiction I decided to concoct mostly my own rules and regulations.
    October 14th, 2014 at 06:20am
  • Candy_land

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    Really good. I love your writing style. Only bit of criticism is that I don't think that a serial killer who is well known for escaping police would be kept in minimum supervision. I think the "dormitory" style prison is for non serious offenders. She would most likely be in maximum security (especially now) and be only allowed out of her cell for exercise and food.
    October 14th, 2014 at 06:13am
  • OMFGitsBeckiie

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    I fuckin love Haven, oh my shit. That was the best altercation I've ever read, a ruthless one as well. She stabbed her in the fucking eyes, then said she wouldn't be looking at her husband again; fucking priceless! Can't wait for more :)
    October 14th, 2014 at 05:18am
  • mrsmshadz

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    Omg this was an the best update!!!!! I love what she did to Lola!!! Bitch deserved it!!!! Bahahaha can't wait for more!!!!! Love how they are in the same prison!!
    October 14th, 2014 at 05:14am
  • K.Shadows

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    AKDJOHEILJ another update! I love this!
    October 14th, 2014 at 04:38am
  • Lalaster

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    Thank you all so much!!
    Your comments keep me motivated!!
    It's been updated, I hope that y'all like it. :)
    October 14th, 2014 at 04:33am
  • K.Shadows

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    Haven will rock that prison, won't take her long to start running things with her attitude. I love this story. It's so different from everything else. MORE SOON!
    October 14th, 2014 at 04:06am
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    I was hooked on Looking Back Now, and I still love it, and I am already in love with this story! Thank you so much for writing this sequel! I really can't wait to see what happens to everyone! Please update soon! Very Happy
    October 14th, 2014 at 12:59am