Change of Perspective - Comments

@ Skyward Starfall
Thank you for the honesty! I will try to go back and fix everything

I tried reading this and well, it was hard for me to read it without stumbling over the grammar and spelling errors. If you feel you can't find the time to fix the errors yourself, then at least have someone look it over for you and fix the errors for you.

@Piper13_89
Thanks!! Means the world that you are enjoying reading it, I am having a blast conjuring it up!!! Will do very soon, hopefully next couple of days. Keep an eye out!

Really enjoying this :) update soon please

@ j.jasmine
Oh gosh THANK YOU!!!! I appreciate you taking the time to comment!! I will try and work on the grammar and spelling (never was a strong suit for me lol).I will update later tonight hopefully!

For this being your first story I can honestly say that you have an ability to make awesome stories! I like your ability to just let the story spill out without really focusing on the exact grammar and punctuation of everything. I think that is something that you will just learn along the way when you continue writing but just having the ability to create a story in which is interesting to read is awesome! I look forward to more of your writing! :)