First Love - Comments

@ Jayme112234
Yeah, it's unlikely he'll take it well. But is playing him the best way to describe it? :) x

@ ArsenalFanKT
Thank you :)

I can only see this ending badly if she continue to plays him like this... x

Chapter 4 was awesome! :)

Bad chapter? Far from!
I really loved the first part, where he's teasing her and she's so ashamed... and then the teacher? What the fuck was that, what a bitch...

I really liked the chapter, it was a great chapter - once again really showed their characters and I can't wait to see how they progress further on because I really like Neymar's cocky side but then again somewhat sweet side and then just Mariana who seems like she's just exploring life and unsure of what to do!

I do feel very bad for Ana, poor little girl... so many struggles already!
Update soon!

@ Jayme112234
I'm glad you like her so much! Thank you x

I'm glad she pulled her sister from the school... who did that teacher think she was talking to. I love Mariana and can't wait to read more x

@ lion eyes
Thank you. I was worried that Mariana wasn't coming across very well and that people wouldn't like her, but I'm glad you find her character relatable.
Simon will definitely stop at nothing to get what he wants and will play a big part in the story.
I'm very glad you started reading this too!

@ winterdays
Thanks alot!

@ Ruby-Red-Phoenix
Thank you. I'll update very soon :)

I actually really like this story... I really like Mariana's sarcasm and just all over 'I don't give a fuck'-attitude about what she's doing, but at the same time she does go along with all of it... I really love how you portrayed her character, I think it's very relatable!

I'm really curious to see where this is going... I must say that I really like the role Simon plays in this too, because I feel like he's one of those 'cunning' bastards that would do anything to get what he wants... I really hope you update soon, I'll sure as hell recommend and subscribe. I seriously can't wait for more, so glad I started reading this!

Love this already! Can't wait for more :)

Yea you updated! I can't wait to read what happens between them. I hope that you update soon.

Loved what I've read so far... can't wait to read more x

Love it already!