You Had My Heart - Comments

Thanks!

@ s h a d o w s

Thanks!

@ s h a d o w s

I'm really enjoying this! Just read the first chapter but have to get to bed for work in the morning. Definitely going to read more tomorrow afternoon! Keep up the good work. They are so cute together so far.

I'm really enjoying this! Just read the first chapter but have to get to bed for work in the morning. Definitely going to read more tomorrow afternoon! Keep up the good work. They are so cute together so far.

Oh crap, thanks! I didn't proofread after making major changes! Thankyouthankyouthankyou

@ SHADOWS COURTESAN

Loving this
Can't wait for more
Small thing chapter 4 the line right under where Jimmy says wassup to the dogs says they walk over to October, he doesn't know it's October yet so how can he know they walked over to October
'I love you more than I will probably love anything' Well that's a fucking lie!

Update soon!