Crimson and Clover - Comments

Omg I'm just now finding this and just wow. So hot and so well written. Please add more!

@ Candystump
Why thank you, love! I hope to add another 'chapter' to this soon. Thank you for reading and commenting! And YEAH! WHO DOESN'T LOVE A DOM PATRICK IN THE SHEETS?!

This is really hot! Really like reading about a dom Patrick! Exactly how I like to imagine him ;)

@ bona drag
lol I'm sure its somewhat a little difficult to read him in such a primal and animal like way, but I thought it would be a good mix to throw in lol. So glad you're enjoying this so far, and hopefully I can get a new chapter out soon! Thanks for reading and commenting! Much love! :)

reading patrick in a role like this...is so odd to me...but you do it so well, that it's almost seamless. i love this, man. keep going!

@ milesandmaisy
d'aaww thank you sweetie! Just a dabbling to keep my brain from going blank :)) Glad you liked it!

*ahem* very well done...*whimpering*

I love everything you do. <3 <3

@ Ali Cat
You and me BOTH. I had that running through my mind as I wrote it and I went nuts on the details and his dominant side. I just HAD to get this out haha! Hope you liked it!

Holy dang I need a cold shower! All I'm thinking about is Patrick going down on a girl omfg what have you done to me??

@ bobobo
Tru dat. ;)

You can never go wrong with more Patrick Stump smut. Dominant Patrick makes me quiver.

@ holysmokes13
LOL! I don't think any type of smut scene (such as this one) will be presented, BUT I am glad you enjoyed it. I'll definitely be looking into having this as a short story, maybe five chapters the most. :D I'll add here and there or when I have a chance! :D

@ milesandmaisy
hehehehe I'll be adding some later on! I'll definitely let everyone know about it!

HOLY FUCK!! *begging* Please, please, please write more!!

AND BTW SINCE ITS REALLY HOT AND ALL I THINK YOU SHOULD ADD SOME MORE CHAPTERS OH YEAH OK BYE

Oh my g od ?? ???? I SWEAR TO GOD, I KNEW THIS WELL WRITTEN ONE SHOT WAS YOURS, OH MY. If Let Them Heal ever have a smut scene like this, I'm going to cry so hard. Wowowowo, I really like the Patrick you picture, rough, yes, but always a gentleman because i'm sURE HE'S LIKE THAT IRL. This is glorious water for thirsty people like me hahaha. Amazing, amazing, I seriously love you!

@ Ali Cat
THANK YOU!! I am so happy you liked it! I am thinking of adding maybe two or three chapters to it, but I will see how that goes. Thanks for your input, love!! IT WAS HOT, HOT, HOT huh?

Fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck. This has me feelin some typa wayyy. I need a cold shower, holy HELL. I love this just the way it is, but I would love more. You left it at a really good spot, but it has me wanting more more more more. I'd love to see where their relationship goes!