Room for Three - Comments

@ Your_love_drella_334
Is it just because of the pairing? Was it weird thinking about Austin, Oli, and Vic together? Because that's totally understandable.

It's better than I thought it would be!

This is interesting. I feel bad for austin and not guilty for the other two. It makes me sad that Oli came in between the two. I don't know? Anger!? Rage!? I don't think I would of hit oli. Scream for sure and shoving, but not all couples are perfect. Can't wist for part two! Want to see how austin and oli work out their differences.

@ A. J.
My age, has that stopped me with Blaze and Colton? Plus, I'm legal. lol
Thank you for telling me which passed, past I needed. I still cannot get that right.
It seems like you're in my head about Oli and Austin....
(They are the lead singers from three different bands, but in an alternative universe.)

I don't know this band, nor have I listened to them, but I love M/M stories. This is even better--a threesome with some trouble in paradise. You're very articulate and have a great plot. The only 'error' was when you wrote "Oli almost never cried. The last time he did, his mother had past." It should be 'passed' as in passed away. I really liked your humor about the third graders. I laughed at what they'd done to Vic. I can imagine all that happening. Bring on the next chapter! I'd love to read how this turns out. (thinking Austin and Oli should just F*** each other and get it out of their system. Then again, I'd better look at your profile and see what age you are. O_O

Oooh I'm excited! :D