In the Background - Comments

SynOfLife (100)

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How do you mean? Some details are left out purposefully for the story to build on.

October 25th, 2014 at 04:44am

Albluerose (205)

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I agree with Goku hina, only about the description. The story is great just more detail :)

October 25th, 2014 at 03:23am

wish on a firefly (885)

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I'm sorry but the white against the black background kinda hurts my eyes because of the bright white text. And you need to add some more details, more description on what's going on because this feels like nothing more than a skeleton of a story.

October 25th, 2014 at 03:10am

Mumford4mee (100)

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Looove this story!! Please don't stop!

September 11th, 2014 at 02:12am

Jas Birdie (100)

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And this... is another very good story! I love it so far (as if I wouldn't *snort*).
Plus the NSFW chapter :D

September 5th, 2014 at 11:37am