Dirty. Clean. Alive. - Comments

I suck at reviews and this is no different, but the comment comes from deep within my heart. This was a fantastic start. I enjoyed it so - it was just -

You have a beautiful way with words and can capture split second emotions in a paragraph. It's a fantastic start, and I look forward to more?

Ahmazingg

That was amazing and extremely well written.

Amazing.

How about this for constructive critism?

WRITE MORE.

:weird

O yh bb.
I've already said this but Mel is a selfish bastard.
:hand:
And you're a twat that writes sexy porn way too well, you make me sick with pleasure. :weird
Gone are the days when I don't find femmeslash hot.
;;P
Way to go with the inspiration, btw. :weird
See, now I don't even have to ask what happened in your dream tbh. xD
Omg, I srsly have to pee again.
My bladder hates me.
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Very sexy story, lovie. And I like the 'Dirty. Clean. Alive.' thing too, v. clever. :weird

*is also scarred for life*
:weird

I was just drinking her in with my eyes.

Perv. :file:

I like it. It was amazingly written and kind of hot, as I've already said to you over MSN but you made me do this too, so :finger:

I still like slash more than femmeslash.
You've obviously watched too much lesbian porn[and maybe you watching American Pie: Beta House the night before the dream helped, too. LOL]
It creeped me out that it was about you and Mel. THANKS FOR USING YOUR REAL NAMES BITCH.
I'm scarred for life.

all i can say is
:weird
HEHEHEHEHE.

Nice work babygirl.
(lol on the double meaning)

New one shot, isn't the best, but hey.
Based on a dream.
For a very special lady. ;;P

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