I'll definitely have to go back and edit it which I'm hoping to do soon
June 11th, 2016 at 05:33am
So I just read this today, start to finish, going to read the sequal in a bit.
I really love the way that you wrote this out. Seeing as I am a huge originals fan and the vampire diaries fan. It was so nice to read, you don't really see any Kol fics on mibba anymore.
When I first started reading it I really thought her and kol would actually be together, like fall in love or something. But reading it more, you see the twisted sense of him, and how greedy he is of what's his. Or what he wants to be his. I wish you would have brought in more of risishka (did I spell it right) or was that a tease? For her dreams it got a little confusing because it wasmbin italics or bold or something. Might want to fix that just in case. (Idk why I said just in case)
Other than that, I'm moving on to the sequal. I really can't wait to see what happens.
