February 24th, 2016 at 08:42pm
I love the summary, it's silly but also shows how nervous said person is. I have a feeling this is going to be funny/cute/sexy. Oh boy
One/One:
I like the insight you give in terms of Jack in the beginning. And the conversation- geez, I feel like men are always talking about that kind of thing.
Aww, poor Jack! Geez, I really hope he doesn't end up accidentally cutting himself.
He's seen gay porn. Some of those dudes look like fucking bears. Preach it!
Oh my God, they talk about shaving so much! Do they ever take a break?
Ah, no. Poor Jack. I hope the guys don't give him too much of a hard time for not shaving.
Oh my God, the texts were so cute! They were so simple, but said so much.
Jack is so awkward about asking the question and I loved it (and I miiiight've felt some second-hand embarrassment). I do enjoy how willing Alex was to help, though.
Alex is so supportive and it's so cute to see! I just want to say that I love how natural the dialogue is- you didn't force it at all!
Yes, the sex is starting. I was just waiting for it, heh.
Once again, I do love how realistic your sex scenes are. There's nothing fake about it and I love how you write the scenes.
They pulled the best prank ever, yes good! Josh reaction to Jack and Alex hooking up was the greatest, omfg.
The end was so freaking cute, holy shit! I loved this so much! It was goofy, but also really adorable. I didn't see any mistakes and everything flowed really well. Great job!
I'M GONNA CRY THIS IS SUCH A NICE COMMENT.
I ended up reading through this with you again and I actually forgot how much I love it. It's just so boyish and funny, I'm really patting myself on the back far too much right now, but thank-you! Your comment has increased my ego tenfold. :')
I'm also so flattered about my sex scenes, thank-youuuuu. I think I'll just end up thanking you forever so I'm gonna shut up now but I'm really glad you enjoyed it!