Slow Me Down - Comments

Octavia Blake (100)

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and Dougie's tryna get his ass beat or somethin'?

February 6th, 2015 at 07:05pm

Octavia Blake (100)

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yes! Can't wait to find out what happens at lunch!

February 6th, 2015 at 07:04pm

Octavia Blake (100)

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this is awesome! keep writing!

January 24th, 2015 at 08:28am

synonymforsarcasm (100)

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Great job

January 11th, 2015 at 06:31pm

caleb617 (100)

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I really like the idea of this! I think the Piper's character will mesh well with Adam's low-key kind of personality. My only suggestion is to maybe put page breaks in between jumps in the story, just to help with the flow. Great start, and I hope you continue!

January 11th, 2015 at 06:46am