As You're Falling Down. - Comments

This was a pretty good chapter Michelle, I'm really proud of it. Good job.

We have quite a lot of different things coming up in this chapter. The tension between Craig and Athena is certainly something that I can see, but I do know deep down they'll come up with a solution especially if there's a little baby in the mixture. Then there's Shelia and Max who I'm sure are going to have their own adventure to contend with especially after the bombs that have been dropped. I am interested to see where this is going to go from here so I'm excited for the next installment.

So many feelz in one chapter...great work.

Yay I'm the first comment. This was the perfect set-up to this story so I cannot wait to see what you guys have planned for it.