Edge of Our Dreams - Comments

Well I'm late getting to this! Sorry love!

However... You have me very intrigued! This is not your norm... but I quite like it!I'm super excited to see where you go with this. :)

I can't wait for more!

I'm liking the start of this story it's got a great narrative. Lilly reminds me of myself with the checking to see if he's a murderer or rapist by looking at him.