Perfect Game - Comments

I love this so much, it's the only story I keep tabs on anymore because the plot is so different and it's so well written

It was still pleasantly long, and the concept behind this story in general is so fucking good.

This is the only work I come on this website to read anymore. Rip.

I love everything about this. From your writing style to the characters- all of it is so perfect. Keep up the good work! :)

I'm in tears I love this

I am in love with this story! I have not read a chaptered fic in at least a year and a half but I read all three of your chapters in one sitting. Keep up the great work! I am sitting on the edge of my seat (which is really just beside my computer) in anticipation for the next installment already

I trudged all the way to the end of the second part, I'm so proud of myself. And of you! That was so good. I love how this encompasses all sides of the real John we see too -- the cocky, fun, confidence and the awkward bits. I love how bashful he gets with Alex. I actually nearly cried when John was trying to officially explain himself and 'come out' in Alex's kitchen; stuff like that gets me right in the heart.

I am internally screaming at all the sub-plot drama though. Tay cheating on Kennedy with Jack, almost getting pregnant with his kid, and continuing to hate him but also be a tiny bit wanting him is KILLING ME. I absolutely LOVE IT.

I can't wait to muster up the energy to read part three where I am sure you will, no doubt, continue to kill my ass.

I randomly decided to finally get through the entire first chapter today and it was so weird cos your third chapter for it came through the ATFF inbox just I was finishing. :')

Anyway, I should sleep (regretfully, cos now I'm hooked) cos it's 2AM but I absolutely love this. I am being total trash and praying for Baradine to become less one-sided as well.

Please update this!! I adore it, it's wonderfully written and Alex is so goddamn hot in it and I just want more - keep it up!! Xx

Please update this!! I adore it, it's wonderfully written and Alex is so goddamn hot in it and I just want more - keep it up!! Xx

I was so excited when I saw that you updated. Great chapters! Keep up the awesome work

ahhhh i love this story <3

Way hey, okay, I like this.

I LOVE THIS AHH

I love this so much

as with all of your fics, this is stunning and amazingly written wow

I'm already obsessed w this OMG I can't wait for the next update!!

I love this story already :) i like the plot line and how its not overdone :) im really exited to see where this goes :)

ahhh this is so good!! so excited for this

oh my goodness! So good!! Can't wait until the next part!