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  • MMM26

    MMM26 (100)

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    I like where this is going so far! Just a little advice, add some tags after the dialogue. Especially in the first chapter, I kept getting lost on who was actually talking. :)
    July 11th, 2015 at 03:48pm
  • synonymforsarcasm

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    cute
    July 8th, 2015 at 04:55am
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