@ gabbycabrella I figured the hearing aids and the hair thing! so does the title mean this is Sid's story and not Jakes? either way, I'm really interested and I'll keep reading it! thanks for clearing it up :)
@ merero Ah yes. Let me try and help. ( I'll put a note in the description about the ageplay as well.) Hmm. Well, I was kind of trying to show that the hearing aids aren't shown, because of Jake's shoulder length hair and the fact that he's so reclusive. He doesn't like people knowing about these sides of him (along with the ageplay) and then it all hastarted to come out when he's between people who care about him and are taking care of him. The driver is there just to kind of show that they don't drive themselves around. Theironically mother is an arrogant prick and could care less about her children, but ya know. The title though actually relates to Sid's feelings for Colin. Anywaaay. Thanks for your comment. Hope that clears up your confusion.
I got really... blindsided with this story. I feel like you should have a note in the description of summary, letting people know it's an age play thing. It started off really good but then random things started getting added in (like the mention of the family driver, which I feel like Henry should have mentioned when talking about all the rooms and stuff) and then the hearing aids thing, it was like you decided to throw them in there, which if you did cool but it was kinda just really random and I feel like something like that would've been brought up before they were seen. It's a unique story, no doubt about that. and the title doesn't really make sense to me... unless Jacob's going to fall in love with Colin which I can't see happening because of Sid and everything?? idk, just a lot of questions, mostly rhetorical.
it's okay! definitely still good!