February 25th, 2016 at 06:00pm
Hi! It's Eve (previously americancandy.) and I'm finally getting around to judging my Christmas contest that I held. Life kinda got in the way and I lost the motivation for a while, so my apologies, but I'm here now!
As promised, I'll be leaving a comment on every entry regardless of the place it ranks.
Of course, you get automatic brownie points for an All Time Low fic.
That was a really sweet story, really fitting with the song, so well done! I noticed a few grammar mistakes here and there (I don't know if you had a beta for this or not) but nothing too major. I liked how casual and easy-going this story was -- it had a plot, but not an overwhelming one. The time-skip was a bit sudden but I love that Jack really went out of his way for Alex to propose; it really showed how he'd mended his old ways.
This is a really nice Christmas fic and I think you did an awesome job, overall. Thanks for entering the contest!
thanks!