Blackstar - Comments

I hope there is a sequel to this!

@ FullMoon2012
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. A friend of mine wanted me to write it so I figured it would be fun to post it on here while I was at it.

Whoa!! I just downed all of that in two days... I think they fell in love a bit quickly, but sometimes that happens. I like how you gradually revealed more and more to the story. It all seemed sort of surreal, like it'd be a really cool fantasy film with a weird glowy effect on the lens. Anyway. Wow! I really enjoyed reading this.