Okay, this is really cute and totally relatable! However, I am quite confused about a couple things. One, Is Salmon and Ezra both guys? Two, is Salmon and Ezra dating? If not, why does Salmon call Ezra "baby"? Overall, this is something that I never thought of doing because it's all in dialogue but in a lot of way it definitely works! I love this because this is exactly how my best friend and I talk and react. She's more like Salmon while I'm like Ezra. I do have a tendency to over exaggerate everything from situations to what people say. So, seeing someone bring that to life in a story is actually very interesting and relieving LoL Please, continue with this because it is very interesting and I definitely will be tuning in every time a chapter is posted!
December 30th, 2017 at 12:48am