Dear London - Comments

  • silk tea.

    silk tea. (400)

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    First thing I'd like to point out is there is a lil type in the 'We share so many memories, some fantastic and brath-taking, some heartbreaking and chest rippling.' Should be breath-taking. :) Anywho, I really really like how this worded as a very nice amiable break up. It's just a very nice, sweet letter and I very much enjoyed reading it.
    October 2nd, 2017 at 05:15am
  • Sansa Stark

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    @ Dragneel.
    Thank you for your comment :)
    May 12th, 2017 at 08:57am
  • lady.bex

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    This is absolutely brilliant. I love how you made this feel like an actual love letter to a person, which makes it just that more delicate? I'm sorry, I'm not sure if that made sense. Short, gripping and inspiring!
    May 11th, 2017 at 10:33pm