Really enjoying this story. Keep up the great creative flow you got going on! Oh and I vote for Keep It! 
October 21st, 2017 at 07:26am
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I had a feeling she'd tell him. I was hoping she'd just try to get a bus ticket or plane ticket. It's less than $300 one way, even from NYOctober 18th, 2017 at 04:15am
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glad you're writing again :) but yep. I hope they didn't get the cab number so she can try to get as far as she can for now. It may make a better chase scene if she's somewhat in the clear.August 23rd, 2017 at 06:52pm
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this is a really really great story :) I've been hoping for an update in a while and you didn't disappoint. Definitely a lot of info tho! Cant wait to see where this is headedJuly 18th, 2017 at 04:36pm
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Wonderful story! Definitely excited for an update!June 5th, 2017 at 08:59pm
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I normally don't read stories that aren't at least 5 chapters in, but damn what a story so far!! Can't wait to see what's next and loving the length of the chapters!May 26th, 2017 at 10:16am
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now I wanna know why she had to work the 2nd floor. Did Colt send her up there knowing they were going to be there that night?May 19th, 2017 at 01:02pm
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I'm really liking this so far. Can't wait to see what's next.May 18th, 2017 at 08:29am
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Cant wait to read the next chapterMay 18th, 2017 at 05:53am
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I wasn't sure at first because I usually wait for at least 3 chapters before I start reading, but this is really good? but 1st day on the 2nd floor. can't wait to read :)May 18th, 2017 at 01:14am
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Would love to see where this goesMay 17th, 2017 at 04:39am
