I LOVED this. Although, I feel, it shouldn't be a surprise that I love your writing :) you are hands down my favorite writer on Mibba and I always check to see what new stories you have brewing.
I truly hope you turn this into a full length story or even add a few more chapters. It is just that amazing. I always love the 'forbidden fruit' type stories and I'm becoming addicted to biker themed stories. It's the best of both worlds!!