Too Young to Fall in Love. - Comments

  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    That was intense! Holy crow! I'm glad Ash took that stance on it, and he's right...there's a huge difference between partying when you know you're pregnant and what happened to Sin. Someone should smack the shit outta Charity, though. Lol.
    April 13th, 2019 at 08:15am
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    Poor Jakey! Lol. Lucky Sin has at least one friend who lives up to his high standards! Atlanta is gonna be bangin'. It's her hometown, and they'll be hanging at a club that her mom owns...there won't be much they can't get away with!
    August 26th, 2018 at 08:15am
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    Aweeeee! He's a sweetheart!!!! And I love flashback chapters. Always good to build more background, if it's relevant. Mr. Green
    August 17th, 2018 at 05:33am
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    I think Ash is going to do something relatively simple, since they've both done the rock star version of dating. I think he'll want this to be very different from past experiences.
    July 30th, 2018 at 04:09am
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    I think she's telling the truth. She's not in the right head space for more BS. But actually dating...? Yeah, despite what she said, I think that she can handle. Mr. Green
    July 24th, 2018 at 09:07am
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    I didn't expect the sexual tension to win that fast. Lol. My guess is that one of them returns to their senses (probably Sin), or someone interrupts them before they can slip off and have sex.
    July 23rd, 2018 at 10:50pm
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    Loved the update
    July 20th, 2018 at 03:27am
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    Lord help me. I would cheat on Jinxx with Ben Bruce. Just saying. Lol.

    At least the girls are making it easier for her, and the guys are being decent so far...even Ash. Of course, it's only day one. There's still plenty of time for it all to go to hell. Ironically, I feel like she might unintentionally hurt Ash again and not the other way around.
    July 9th, 2018 at 06:03am
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    No reason to be ashamed of the past! But it is an interesting glimpse into how she became the way she is, especially those tidbits about Nikki and her mom's boyfriends. Awe! CC and Meadow are so cute! And it's good that the girls have each other...keeps them from drowning in the testosterone ocean. Lol.
    July 2nd, 2018 at 07:41am
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    Loved it.
    July 1st, 2018 at 10:06pm
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    Oh yeah. This isn't awkward at all. Lol. Love how everyone is managing to get their ten cents in on the former relationship. Band guys gossip more than teenage girls.
    June 30th, 2018 at 09:19am
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    This is really amazing! Really looking forward to reading more soon!
    June 29th, 2018 at 02:29pm
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    Loved it
    June 29th, 2018 at 02:13am
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    @ california sunrise.

    Mr. Green I just decided to listen to the soundtrack.
    May 14th, 2018 at 06:03am
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    Ashley's become a cocky little shit, hasn't he? Lol. Loved the chapter!
    May 14th, 2018 at 05:18am
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    I really loved it, I can't wait to see more of it hon!
    May 14th, 2018 at 03:23am
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    mission accomplished! lol lmfao
    May 14th, 2018 at 03:14am
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    I can't blame her for laying some ground rules for Purdy. I wouldn't wanna be there while my ex treats the bus like a brothel, either. Ick.

    And I hope you know you got "Me Against the Devil" stuck in my head. Lol. I was toying with the idea of writing a story about The Relentless...
    May 14th, 2018 at 03:03am
  • Vixyn of Shadows

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    Atleast they sent the girls in to ask. Because she might have just kicked the guys out. It sounds like it would be a hard job to pass up but harder being around the ex. Loved the update!
    May 9th, 2018 at 03:57pm
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    Sounds like the photographer gig will be a good one financially, but man...emotionally, that's gonna be an issue. Nice of the guys to think of her, although Ash probably has ulterior motives.

    Can't wait for more!
    May 9th, 2018 at 12:22am