Girl I Know - Comments

Idk Madi. This one seemed more forced than the others. More rushed. Maybe think about what you got down and re-read it. Im sure there are more details that can be thrown in to tie it in better

This was hawt! Loved the viewpoint change! Still on edge about how bad she's going to hurt him though

Dif POV's are a good thing! I used to do it when I wrote. Gives a wider perspective to the situation. Thanks for the double update!!

Damn Matt, loved the updates. I hope her and Brian can sort something out

Love this story so much. I hope real life smooths out! I'm almost to the point of biting my nails off to figure out what she's really hiding!! can't wait for more!

Holy guacamole! I think this Brian guy is gonna really get hurt. Like she seems to destroy any shot at happiness she gets. They might have a kid together and she might leave him high and dry. Looks like Thea is on the fast track to self destruction.

Intrigued as to see what happens next

"Why can't you be nice to me? You're nice to everybody else.."

I'm so roped in by this story. It's great and I'm excited to read more!

Seriously love the update. I’m so interested to find out more of why Matt and Thea are like this. Can’t wait for more!!

Again, I love it! I still can't figure out your next move, which makes it alll the while and very intriguing. Love the newest tidbits of info. I now have two theories; one different, the other the same. Can't wait for the next exciting chapter!

I agree 100% with millyx; I never know how each chapter is going to turn out. There are some stories where I can predict the out come or see the direction of the next part but never with this one. I love it because foreshadowing the next chapter gets old. And thank you for the lovely shout out to your commenters! Anywho, can't wait for the next installment!

I love how this story is so unpredictable. It’s torture, the way things go back and forth and the emotions and all that, but I love that I don’t know what to expect in the next chapter. I can’t wait for more!!!

I fell behind! Whoops! So I loved the last few chapters. It is still breaking my heart that Brian makes her truly happy, and vice versa, yet they can't be together. Even if Matt signed divorce papers, I feel there would be a lot of hostility if Brian and Thea gave a real relationship a chance. It's nice to see Zack still resisting, if barely. He seems to be the only one she somewhat listens to. Still curious about Max and the others. I'm with SynysterKitty; I think there's a kid out there. Perhaps with her former boss? Anyway, can't wait for more!

Okay theory one is she has a kid somewhere with someone. Well okay, its my only theory but it counts, right? LOL Anyways, I love the long chapter and maybe if she plays her cards right, she can make it out of the deal unbruised or physically hurt for the rest of the tour. Can't wait for more!!

I too love Gilmore Girls!

P.S. If you haven't already, I suggest the swedish version of the movie. The US version is so bad I couldn't suffer watching it. Plus the actors of the Swedish version are a better fit to the books I think; they are the best and I love them! LOL.

Quick friendly edit, Steig Larsson. Anywho, I'm so pissed he dumped her camera, especially if she had her memory card in there...Can't wait for more!

Yessssss!!
Fuck Matt, but yessss! So glad you updated and I CANNOT wait to see what unfolds. Love love love this!

Started reading this yesterday and can’t get enough!!!