Summer Ice. - Comments

  • lonely girl.

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    omfg okay I totally didn't think of that in the right context then. My bad. Facepalm lmfao

    Thank you!!
    April 12th, 2019 at 05:07am
  • the god of thunder.

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    @ fala amo.
    LOL HI and also thank you!!!!
    and HAHA whipping semen was actually correct, he was splattering it off his hand lmaoo.

    And oh the banner is from here!!!. I always feel weird making layouts on mibba because it literally is not crediting artists, but mibba is dead so hopefully it doesn't matter. (I only really post here in addition to ao3 for my own ability to edit with a nice aesthetic). I should start linking in the summary on principle or something. :|
    April 12th, 2019 at 05:02am
  • lonely girl.

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    First things first, I would love to know where you got your banner image from because it looks like a really cool artwork but anyway I digress.

    OKAY UM.
    Are you telling me Peter killed the upstairs angry dad. Holy shit.
    Anyway, I really enjoyed this piece, especially how you really got their characters -- I was laughing at pretty much all of the jokes and Deadpool's snarkiness. I especially enjoyed the parentheses "note to the readers" part.
    The layout works well, although the background may be a touch too busy? And with your grammar and spelling all looks well except you have whipping semen instead of wiping semen.
    Very funny, very touching read!
    April 11th, 2019 at 11:47am