I could definitely see this as a full story! Even this little bit was very descriptive. I could visualize it clearly.
June 29th, 2019 at 04:06am
Chasing the Enemy - Comments
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LOVE THIS! I'd really like to see it as a full-blown story, I think there's so much that you could do with it! Either way, this is amazingly written and creepy as hell.June 25th, 2019 at 07:46pm
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Dude, that was creepy! I would love to see this turn into a full story!June 25th, 2019 at 03:28am
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I like the start to this. Full story would be awesome. I can't see what you come up with.June 25th, 2019 at 03:23am
