The Final Episode - Comments

Loved it

This man just has it wayyyy too easy with her.
Though it really is a welcome change to see his thought process regarding her and sex and the scents and feeling of satisfaction he attached to her.
He never said he didn’t feel anything for her, only that he was not interested in a relationship. Always nice to see that there’s a beating heart inside this feral man.
Loved it, however, I was flushed and should have possibly not read it at work, even without graphics contents per-se

@ PhenoBarbiDoll

Time to hit up the liquor store then

@ AlcoholicCasper

Not to give anything away, but you might wanna have some on hand for the next chapter, too

Whelp I guess I’ll just have to polish off the rest of my Tequila Rose after reading that

Kori understands that she won't be swayed and is tired of everyone trying to do so. I'm sure she's against their whole dynamic like everyone else is but is more willing to let her enjoy it while it lasts.

Ughhhh...she would chance what she has with Paul. Everything they could be. Because Till cunningly planted a seed of doubt. A glimmer of hope. Toeing the line of truth and lies. Fool me once...twice. But a third time! Is her need for him really so strong, that she would do this? I kind of want to smack her: she is a sucker for punishment and I am afraid she’ll end up falling into her own sword. Paul will not be waiting around, he was in two minds about actually giving his feelings any legitimacy to begin with, hesitation on her part could be the doubt he needed to distance himself romantically. He is not desperate for this relationship.
Long, nice chapter. So much insight and great to see how she handles herself with Till compared to years passed.

@ AlcoholicCasper

He's an optimist. He believes she'll eventually get her head out of her ass.

I mean, in all honesty, Paul knows the hold Till has over her so why is he so surprised? This entire trip was his idea and now he's mad because it blew up in his face

Paul is very composed, but being accused of having waited on the sidelines for his chance to get his dick wet is totally uncalled for yet so typical for Till. He just loves to have people bristle up. At least he isn’t causing a scene with his matter-of-factory response.

Leaving with Till to a private setting? This is like a bad horror movie when you know that you shouldn’t go into the basement or turn to look over your shoulder while running! I don’t trust him enough to heed her warning and have no faith in her resolve to actually keep up her end of the warning!

I am preparing myself for wanting to smack someone with the next update...just not sure who’ll be the victim!

@ PhenoBarbiDoll

Yes

@ AlcoholicCasper

Did you really want a chapter over 3000 words?

@ PhenoBarbiDoll

I hadn't noticed

@ AlcoholicCasper

Cliffhangers are my favorite writing technique

So not fair! You always end it when things are getting interesting!

Amazing update

Loved it

Awwwww the end part though! He is so sweet! Not that Till deserves it

I think it’ll always be hard for her to not compare Till to others. Just because there seems to be something beneath the surface that neither talk about. But he seems to be the bar she has set for other men without realizing it. Oh dear just out of the blue sends that, but it would be good to have more time with those two . Loved it!

Amazing update!