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  • yo.

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    I'm glad you told me to read this.
    : D
    July 23rd, 2009 at 07:07am
  • Deputy Heart Eyes

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    WOW!
    I loved it... like seriously, loved it....
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    -Kayt
    July 9th, 2009 at 09:11pm
  • Hold Me

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    awwwwwwww
    I love it. It was so cute.
    When will you have the next one up? ;)
    August 5th, 2008 at 07:16pm
  • Trainer 4735

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    This was beautiful! I loved it!
    As a reader I thought it was nearly perfect how you could demostrate the characters emotions towards one another.
    As a writer your words flowed and everything made sense; I think this was a beautiful piece of work. Well done!
    July 30th, 2008 at 05:16am
  • bamagyrl222

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    Wow. Awesome story, Jen!!

    That last kiss was steamy, but still innocent and sweet.

    And your characters are so well-developed!

    Wow. GREAT WRITING!!!

    Soooo.... When will you have the next one up??? lol ;-)
    June 23rd, 2008 at 06:00am
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