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  • PishPosh

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    I have a ridiculous Death Note obsession.
    Tee hee, I have a ridiculous obsession too, but now that it ended my obsession has gone to Code Geass xD
    November 16th, 2008 at 08:08pm
  • Pseudonym

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    Fluff! I love it You should seriuosly continue this :P
    September 16th, 2008 at 06:55pm
  • akasagarbha

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    OI. :yah
    So, I'm just looking at your profile, click the stories link and then I see this glorious thing at the top.
    Of course I have to click it. xD

    I love this sort of fluff. And it's difficult to keep these two in character when the whole story's supposed to be soft and Light and L are most likely the least soft main characters in the history of forever. An exaggeration, but I digress.

    I really loved how deep inside, you made L afraid of Kira just like most of the public. You showed that L was actually just a mere human, not some superhero bent on saving the public from some mass serial killer named Kira like he attempts to be. L is human. And I adore that.

    And nice Light? :yah YES PLZ. The innocent Light that we loved in the beginning of the series is one of my favorite aspects of him, and you acheived the anti-Kira Light character that we associated with during the Yotsuba arc very well.

    All and all, I loved this one-shot.
    Whether you continue or not is fine by me. It does well on its own, but if you figure out a longer plot, then that's awesome too. ^_^
    July 8th, 2008 at 06:01pm
  • mycroftholmes

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    So totally.

    I've only been watching for 3 days. But I'm so addicted. I went running into our school library for the first time ever demanding if they had the manga. They didn't so I'm gonna have to go book shopping for it. But yeah

    keep going.
    June 28th, 2008 at 08:46pm
  • hot dang.

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    Woweeeee, you think I should continue?
    Safe ^_______^
    But yeah the stair episode is the cutest. >.<
    June 28th, 2008 at 08:37pm
  • mycroftholmes

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    OHMYGOD.

    KEEP GOING WITH THIS. In Love

    I think I love you for writing this.... It's only a matter of time until I start writing Death Note fiction....

    I've managed to get SO addicted in the past 3 days it's unbelievable

    But yes

    That episode where L and Light are on the stairs... where L was in the rain and he is now massaging Light's feet... It looks like L is in love with Light.

    ^_^

    anyway keep going *subscribes*
    June 28th, 2008 at 08:18pm
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