I liked this. Personally, I would have enjoyed it more if it had been more flushed out, or if more had happened, but it was still good. =]
April 25th, 2009 at 11:10pm
Woooow that was really something. I didn't see the ending coming. It was like a punch in the face and I love it. Nice precise wording and description. That was lovely. What a great read.
There was a grammatical error that I noticed. It was like this:
"blahblahblah." I said.
It should be...
"blahblahblah," I said.
Ya dig?
