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Urza (100)

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Chapter One - Excellent introduction Bryan, you set the scene very well and make the story three demensional from the start with backstory, present situation and foreshadowing.

I'll leave another comment once I read chapter two.

~William~

December 28th, 2007 at 06:43am

Male Prostitute (100)

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Wow your a really good writer! Keep up with the updates =]

June 26th, 2007 at 01:05am

Fueled By Dana (100)

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I love it! Update soon, please!

June 12th, 2007 at 05:22am

rollenmuziek (100)

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I honestly don't know why I'm the only one commenting--this story is amazing!

May 29th, 2007 at 01:26am

rollenmuziek (100)

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Nice job!

May 9th, 2007 at 12:09am

rollenmuziek (100)

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Keep it up! This story is addictive, so to speak.

April 26th, 2007 at 11:33pm

rollenmuziek (100)

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Ooh...I can feel the excitement! I can't wait to find out what happens next!

April 23rd, 2007 at 11:59pm

rollenmuziek (100)

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Very interesting...update soon!

April 22nd, 2007 at 04:30pm

rollenmuziek (100)

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I adore the sensory and original plotline. Keep up the good work.

April 22nd, 2007 at 06:54am