This Jet Black Feeling - Comments

Lol, what a cliff hanger!! More plz!

Eventually. At the moment I'm working on updating my other story, You Don't Love Me, Not Like I Love You.
I went through a long time (two years, as you can see) where I couldn't write anything, and now that I'm at university I have even more stuff other than this which I should be doing, but I will try to update :)

...so you are gonna update this right?

Sex AND carnage.

YUS!! WRITE THIS Or YOU'LL HAVE A VERY UPSET PUNK KID ON YOUR ASS!!!!

j/k xD!!!!

xo mace

:D WRITE MORE.......NOW!!! LoLz

i literally screamed "fuck" when i read the last chapter.....write more soon???

I like it. :D
Not much else to say except...
Where's a layout? (sorry I'm kind of obsessive about layouts)
But I like it and I shall subscribe *Hits subscribe button*

That's really good so far! You should write more, man! :tehe:

wow, very good, you should definitly write more. You'r a very good writer but you should make it longer!

Despite you thinking of this as "cliche," I like it. You tell it in a different way, which is what makes it unique.

I thought you might have up-dated so i checked lol
and you did ! YAY! Lol
so here i am commenting
I love it
Great introduction-ship! lol
ermmm Just wondering is this going to be mostly in Franks POV ?

lol
libbyness:D

hehe frankies having wet dreams about gee! awsome update
cant wait for ch 3 x]

very frisky
frank tut tut *laughs*
libby

more soon

ooooo this is good!
poor frankie *shakes head*
update soon? x-]