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  • Tre the Cool.

    Tre the Cool. (100)

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    I like it. :D

    write more soon.
    April 29th, 2007 at 05:03pm
  • silver shotgun

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    Love the update xD
    April 29th, 2007 at 04:21am
  • Tre the Cool.

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    me likes it.
    April 28th, 2007 at 07:31pm
  • eighteen inches

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    agreed
    April 28th, 2007 at 04:20pm
  • Tre the Cool.

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    I love it. Just little tips:
    Make sure you check your spelling before you post it and make sure there's some kind of punctuation at the end of your dialogue. :D

    If you fix that, it will be awesome. :D
    April 28th, 2007 at 02:11pm
  • Sensual Violation

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    I'm excited xD
    April 28th, 2007 at 10:21am
  • silver shotgun

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    I like it so far xD MORE PLEASE!
    April 28th, 2007 at 04:51am
  • Guard Geek 101

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    could you guys read my other story
    Zecadiah and Steveen a story of true love please thank you
    April 28th, 2007 at 04:48am
  • Tre the Cool.

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    OMG I sound so cool! LMFAO.

    I liked it. The only thing though, is that when you start dialogue, start a new line. :D Either than that, its awesome.
    April 28th, 2007 at 04:46am
  • eighteen inches

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    and me!
    yeah, it was cool
    cant wait for more
    April 28th, 2007 at 04:24am
  • Tre the Cool.

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    First comment. WOOT WOOT

    I liked it. :D

    *points to part of story where it says his best friends* THATS ME!!!

    lmfao.

    keep writing.
    April 28th, 2007 at 03:25am
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