Intensity - Comments

I loooove this story and this update was definitely worth the wait. I'd love to read more!

THINGS are just about to get interesting. I like that.;)

this story is love

I love this update, another one soon please?
<3 :}

please please please update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love love love this story!
You have such a creative writing style, please update soon?
<3 :}

i love it:)
it's...beyond amazing
this chapter was really really awesome.
cant wait for more=]

please update soon!!!!!!!!

update
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lol
pleeease?

x

Oooo...i like it:D
It's different...in a good way.
Not like most stories on here, and i like that =]
add more soon?
<3

Hmmm by the popularity of some of your previous stories I can see you don't really need any advice on how to write a good story, forgive me :mrgreen:

It's a very good start to a story, different, not based on the popular pretty cheerleader, or the dark and moody odd-ball but a mix of the two :) I like.

I'm also wanting to meet this Cullen guy to see what happens there. But if you want to keep this story unique then just make sure you don't fall into the many pit holes that would make this story like half the others on this site, plan a few twists, and you know, it doesn't always have to turn out all right in the end.