The Whole Time You Just Watched Me Fall - Comments

Oh my god. [I took forever to read this cause I didn't know it was updated since I rarely check my subscriptions.://]
Frank is an a-hole.
I just wanna punch him square in the jaw, knock some sense into him. grrrr.
More soon.

i hope she's gonna be okay!!

oh god,what's going to happen?
Loved it tons.
More soon.
<3

lol! I am working on it!!

awesome story!! more soon!!

Glad you liked it! I am going to keep working on some more tonight after I see the play Peter Pan :)

great update! loved it!

she isnt going to take this news well!!

oh i fink they should leave frankie alone es well sexy n cute xoxoxox
keep it up lol xxxxxxx

yay
wish for more soon XD

Holy f*ck!
Amazing updates.
Loved them tons.
More soon.

awsome

woot woot I updated twice guys!! Sorry it took longer than what I anticipated, I just had so many things come up at once. But I got it up! Comment guys! This story is gonna get more heated up as it goes on ... you'll see.

Wow Kimberly is a bitch.
Loved it tons
More soon.

yes. I am happy you guys like it too. I am going to write more after I babysit today. Talk to you guys later

more soon plz!! great to see you've written more!!!

woot
yay ive waited ages but the suspence was worth it XD
awsome update

hiya ive just started this story n i fink its gd
tht stepdaughter is a bitch
and i like gerard and mikeys new sister shes fuckin awesome
keep it comin

It may have taken a while, but I have finally updated for you guys!! Hope you enjoy!! Let me know what you guys think! Thank you!!

yay can't wait

*holds on *