October 8th, 2008 at 01:31pm
Sighhhh, I love this story. And it makes me feel better that you comment often (:
Btw, I really like the story line of this, it makes it really interesting (:
Update soon!
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Your Hand in Mine - Comments
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October 8th, 2008 at 07:48am
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more soon!!!October 8th, 2008 at 07:45am
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Shit, dude, that's freaky! gabe or Alex... Damn, that's a tough choice. Bwahahaha! There's only one thing I didn't understand in chapter 7.
You wrote:
"Alex was leaving in the morning. We had already had our final date tomorrow, and an even bigger hole was in my chest."
That makes no sense, because if he was leaving in the morning, how did they have their date tomorrow? You may want to fix that up so future readers don't get lost.
LOVE THIS STORY! Haha, more soon, please?October 8th, 2008 at 05:11am -
i just started reading.
i love this story.
it's really good. :]October 8th, 2008 at 02:05am -
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH.
If those damn people don't start commenting... I'll kill myself.. Not literally... virtually?!
You beter comment, people, or I'll cry.October 6th, 2008 at 09:49am -
I love it.
Poor Gabe, he's all lonely ):
Haha, update sooooon! : D
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Aww I love this story so much! : D
Update as soon as you cannnnn!
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Awww, haha, too adorable. And I don't think gabe is fooling anyone with his bullshit "I don't love her act," Haha! I love this story! Oh, and I can't wait for more!October 4th, 2008 at 09:09pm
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i love it! more soon pleaseOctober 4th, 2008 at 01:30pm
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Aww, I love this story so much (:
Update soon please!October 4th, 2008 at 09:58am -
that didn't suck at all! that was cute....come on, Gabe covered in whipped cream? you did GREAT! LOL :)October 4th, 2008 at 09:27am
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AMAZING! update soon, I want to know what happins next :DOctober 4th, 2008 at 04:31am
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as cute as...
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brendon's hair-straightening face!October 4th, 2008 at 02:03am -
Awww, haha, the way they act does make them seem like a couple.October 4th, 2008 at 02:01am
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Ohhh... shit. :O More soon? Oh, and if you want a banner, send me a message and I'll make you one.October 4th, 2008 at 01:45am
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=O
nooooo gabe
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Oh my gosh, I love this so much!
More, please??
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I like it so far. Pretty interesting way to start it, which is good.October 1st, 2008 at 08:32am
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Whew, that sounds so interesting! For cereal! But, shit, full sympath to her; that's some tough shit! I love Gabe though. He's her avior!
Haha, I'm so def gonna subscribe. I didn't really catch any errors either, so that's really really good. Update soon, please!October 1st, 2008 at 08:08am
I got mentioned!!!! ^_^
Ahh, seriously, I love you!
You are like, the only person who frequently, frequently updates one of the stories I read!!!
It's great, I love it, update asap (:
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