Innocence - Comments

This is just simply... wow.
I loved it!

God, I wish I could say something! I'm completely and utterly speechless.
It was just that amazing.

And, since I'm a lazy bum and don't like replying to messages, just to let you know, the challenge will never close. ;D

wow, really liked it, really like the imagery. It was interesting, kind of like the mixture of a poem and a story and the same time, creating this unique rhyme and meter. I really, really liked it. If you ever plan on turning it into something more I would be estatic, or at least to read some more of your stuff. Love your style.
~Michelle Erin.

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