Status: Rewriting
You Can't Lie To A Liar
Cliché
Viktoria threw my alarm clock against the wall. Not even 10 seconds later and her dad
walked in. "What the hell,people are trying to sleep," he yelled. She could still smell the
alcohol on him. "It's 7:30, I have to get ready for school and so does Axel," She got the
clothes she was going to wear for the day out and continued what she was going to say
"and shouldn't you be getting ready to go to a job interview?" She looked at him. "Don't talk
back to me, I'm your dad, show me some respect!" He yelled taking steps towards her. "I
can talk to you how I want you and you are not my father!" She yelled back. He took a step
closer and raised his fist at her, she could tell he was about to hit her. She heard
something at the door she looked past my father and saw Axel. " What's the matter?" he
asked tiredly. Her father put his fist down. She walked past him and up to Axel. "Nothing
don't worry," She smiled reassuringly and continued, " now go get ready for school, by the
time your done breakfast will be ready." He gave her a hug and went on his way. She
walked out of her room not looking back at her father and went in the bathroom and
changed.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"Bye," she gave my brother a hug. "Can i go to john's house after school, he got the
new Guitar Hero for the Wii?" he asked giving her, with his adorable puppy dog eyes.” Did
you ask dad?" he looked down, "No." She sighed. "Yea you can go. But call me when you
get there and call me when your ready to leave so I can come and get you." He smiled. "Ok,
thank you, thank you, thank you," She laughed and he gave her a hug before walked into the
school. She smiled and walked down the street to the high school. As she got to the door,
she heard her name being yelled. She turned around and saw her best friend Christoffer
running towards her. "Hey." She laughed, he was jumping up and down. "Guess wha?!" he
yelled just as she was about to say something, "Say Forever is going to be in Battle of The
Bands." She laughed and gave him a hug."Really? That's great!" The hug lasted for about
5 seconds unit she heard her voice. "Hey Chris baby," Liv practically yelled while pushing
Viktoria away from the hug. "I heard the news," she smiled and gave him a kiss while
putting her arms around his neck. "Get a room," Viktoria said in disgust, rolling eyes.
"Maybe we should," Liv whispered in Christoffers' ear. He laughed a little and Live looked
up at him and smiled. The bell rang, Viktoria walked off into the crowd of other kids,without
saying goodbye. 'Like he would care he was to busy making out with Liv,' she thought,
sighing. "I'll see you tonight baby," Liv said kissing Christoffer goodbye. He looked around
for Viktoria, notching she had left already. The late bell rang loudly, knocking Christoffer out
of his thoughts, "Shit I'm late again." He cursed running to his first period class. Viktoria
took her seat in her first period class Chemistry. She put my head on my desk tiredly, she
hated the fact that she would never be able to be with him, not as a friends or best friend
she was already that to him, but as a girlfriend. "Well nice of you to join us Mr.Ness."
Mr.Braaten, Christoffer and Viktoria 's homeroom teacher said obviously pissed at
Christoffer constant tardiness. He sat in my seat next to Viktoria. "Hey what happen to you
early?" He asked her. "What do you mean?" she asked. "What I mean is you just left this
morning without saying bye or anything," He looked at her waiting for a answer. "Sorry, you
seemed busy, I didn't want to interrupt anything,” she said I could tell something was
wrong. "What's the matter Roar, was he drunk again last night," I whispered to her. She
looked at me or more like gave me a death glare. "He's drunk every night," she said a little
loud to because everyone turned around and looked at her including Mr.Braaten. "Viktoria
Roar Lansen do you have something you would like to share with the class?" he asked her.
"No Mr.Braaten and it's Larsen not Lansen," she said starting at the front of the room.
Mr.Braaten continue to talk to the class. “Roar!" Christoffer called trying to get her attention.
She just ignored him. He continued, "I know something’s wrong Roar, please talk to me."
"Nothings wrong can't you just leave me alone some people are trying to learn," she yelled
again getting the whole classes attention. "Miss Lansen," Mr.Braaten started before she cut
him off and yelled " It's not Lansen it's fucking Larsen." Mr.Braaten looked at her, "That's it
get your things and go to the office. I will not put up with this." he yelled. She got up and
walked out the class without waiting to get a pass from the teacher. Christoffer swore he
heard Mr.Braaten mutter various curse words under his breath. "Now that all the distraction
are over we can continue." Mr.Braaten continued to teach while Christoffer continued to
wonder what happen to my best friend.
Viktoria sat in her room thinking of how dumb she had acted just because of
jealousy. After she had stormed out the classroom she walked in the main office. 'I guess
they where already expecting me,' she thought because as soon as she got there the
principal was standing there with her dad. "She's been in 4 fights this month and she
always talking back to the teacher," Mr. Tomas the principal said. He continued, "she has
excellent grade but her attitude is holing her back." She sighednot really caring what
punishment she was getting from him, she was more worried about what would happen
when she got home. She spaced out thinking of the punishment she would get once home.
"Miss Larsen, Miss Larsen, did you hear me?" Mr. Tomas said. "Viktoria!" Her dad yelled
making her and Mr. Tomas jump. "Yea. I heard you. I'm sorry it won't happen again." She
always used that line in times like this. "You better make sure of that. I'll be checking in on
your behavior on Monday," Mr. Tomas said standing up. "OK" I sighed and stood up to. "I'll
see later dad," I said not looking at him. "Miss Larsen you've been suspended for the rest
of the day, You said you heard me." She laughed, she was nervous but I didn't let it show.
"Yea. I did sorry." The drive home consisted of silence. "I'll see you in a hour," her dad said
as we pulled up in front of the house."Where are you going?" I asked. "Food, don't you want
to eat! Now get out of the fucking car!" he yelled, obviously pissed that he was missing
happy hour. Which brings her here, laying on her bed starring at the ceiling with nothing to
do. She looked the clock 12:20,lunch time. She felt like shit for how she treated Christoffer,
she took out my phone and texted him, 'I got suspended for the rest of the day. I’m a total
badass. Lol. Sorry for the way I acted.' I looked at the screen. I knew I had to tell him
even thought I didn’t want to, 'your probably going to laugh at me when I tell you why, I
don’t know if I should tell you thou. XOXO Roar.' She sent the message, about 2 minutes
later he texted back, 'It just makes you even more awesome! Haha it’s ok. I promise I
won’t laugh. ust tell me. XXX.' 'Was I really going to tell my best friend that I was in love
with him. Eh it’s so fucking cliché. Girl falls for best friend. Best friend admits he’s always
loved her. He breaks up with his girlfriend and goes out with her. Ha! Yea right, how can he
love me and even if he did and I’m pretty damn sure he wouldn’t leave his girlfriend for me,
she everything and I’m nothing,'she thought looking in the mirror. 'This could be very
good or very very bad. But I’ll never know if I don't try.'She sighed starting to text him back
walked in. "What the hell,people are trying to sleep," he yelled. She could still smell the
alcohol on him. "It's 7:30, I have to get ready for school and so does Axel," She got the
clothes she was going to wear for the day out and continued what she was going to say
"and shouldn't you be getting ready to go to a job interview?" She looked at him. "Don't talk
back to me, I'm your dad, show me some respect!" He yelled taking steps towards her. "I
can talk to you how I want you and you are not my father!" She yelled back. He took a step
closer and raised his fist at her, she could tell he was about to hit her. She heard
something at the door she looked past my father and saw Axel. " What's the matter?" he
asked tiredly. Her father put his fist down. She walked past him and up to Axel. "Nothing
don't worry," She smiled reassuringly and continued, " now go get ready for school, by the
time your done breakfast will be ready." He gave her a hug and went on his way. She
walked out of her room not looking back at her father and went in the bathroom and
changed.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"Bye," she gave my brother a hug. "Can i go to john's house after school, he got the
new Guitar Hero for the Wii?" he asked giving her, with his adorable puppy dog eyes.” Did
you ask dad?" he looked down, "No." She sighed. "Yea you can go. But call me when you
get there and call me when your ready to leave so I can come and get you." He smiled. "Ok,
thank you, thank you, thank you," She laughed and he gave her a hug before walked into the
school. She smiled and walked down the street to the high school. As she got to the door,
she heard her name being yelled. She turned around and saw her best friend Christoffer
running towards her. "Hey." She laughed, he was jumping up and down. "Guess wha?!" he
yelled just as she was about to say something, "Say Forever is going to be in Battle of The
Bands." She laughed and gave him a hug."Really? That's great!" The hug lasted for about
5 seconds unit she heard her voice. "Hey Chris baby," Liv practically yelled while pushing
Viktoria away from the hug. "I heard the news," she smiled and gave him a kiss while
putting her arms around his neck. "Get a room," Viktoria said in disgust, rolling eyes.
"Maybe we should," Liv whispered in Christoffers' ear. He laughed a little and Live looked
up at him and smiled. The bell rang, Viktoria walked off into the crowd of other kids,without
saying goodbye. 'Like he would care he was to busy making out with Liv,' she thought,
sighing. "I'll see you tonight baby," Liv said kissing Christoffer goodbye. He looked around
for Viktoria, notching she had left already. The late bell rang loudly, knocking Christoffer out
of his thoughts, "Shit I'm late again." He cursed running to his first period class. Viktoria
took her seat in her first period class Chemistry. She put my head on my desk tiredly, she
hated the fact that she would never be able to be with him, not as a friends or best friend
she was already that to him, but as a girlfriend. "Well nice of you to join us Mr.Ness."
Mr.Braaten, Christoffer and Viktoria 's homeroom teacher said obviously pissed at
Christoffer constant tardiness. He sat in my seat next to Viktoria. "Hey what happen to you
early?" He asked her. "What do you mean?" she asked. "What I mean is you just left this
morning without saying bye or anything," He looked at her waiting for a answer. "Sorry, you
seemed busy, I didn't want to interrupt anything,” she said I could tell something was
wrong. "What's the matter Roar, was he drunk again last night," I whispered to her. She
looked at me or more like gave me a death glare. "He's drunk every night," she said a little
loud to because everyone turned around and looked at her including Mr.Braaten. "Viktoria
Roar Lansen do you have something you would like to share with the class?" he asked her.
"No Mr.Braaten and it's Larsen not Lansen," she said starting at the front of the room.
Mr.Braaten continue to talk to the class. “Roar!" Christoffer called trying to get her attention.
She just ignored him. He continued, "I know something’s wrong Roar, please talk to me."
"Nothings wrong can't you just leave me alone some people are trying to learn," she yelled
again getting the whole classes attention. "Miss Lansen," Mr.Braaten started before she cut
him off and yelled " It's not Lansen it's fucking Larsen." Mr.Braaten looked at her, "That's it
get your things and go to the office. I will not put up with this." he yelled. She got up and
walked out the class without waiting to get a pass from the teacher. Christoffer swore he
heard Mr.Braaten mutter various curse words under his breath. "Now that all the distraction
are over we can continue." Mr.Braaten continued to teach while Christoffer continued to
wonder what happen to my best friend.
Viktoria sat in her room thinking of how dumb she had acted just because of
jealousy. After she had stormed out the classroom she walked in the main office. 'I guess
they where already expecting me,' she thought because as soon as she got there the
principal was standing there with her dad. "She's been in 4 fights this month and she
always talking back to the teacher," Mr. Tomas the principal said. He continued, "she has
excellent grade but her attitude is holing her back." She sighednot really caring what
punishment she was getting from him, she was more worried about what would happen
when she got home. She spaced out thinking of the punishment she would get once home.
"Miss Larsen, Miss Larsen, did you hear me?" Mr. Tomas said. "Viktoria!" Her dad yelled
making her and Mr. Tomas jump. "Yea. I heard you. I'm sorry it won't happen again." She
always used that line in times like this. "You better make sure of that. I'll be checking in on
your behavior on Monday," Mr. Tomas said standing up. "OK" I sighed and stood up to. "I'll
see later dad," I said not looking at him. "Miss Larsen you've been suspended for the rest
of the day, You said you heard me." She laughed, she was nervous but I didn't let it show.
"Yea. I did sorry." The drive home consisted of silence. "I'll see you in a hour," her dad said
as we pulled up in front of the house."Where are you going?" I asked. "Food, don't you want
to eat! Now get out of the fucking car!" he yelled, obviously pissed that he was missing
happy hour. Which brings her here, laying on her bed starring at the ceiling with nothing to
do. She looked the clock 12:20,lunch time. She felt like shit for how she treated Christoffer,
she took out my phone and texted him, 'I got suspended for the rest of the day. I’m a total
badass. Lol. Sorry for the way I acted.' I looked at the screen. I knew I had to tell him
even thought I didn’t want to, 'your probably going to laugh at me when I tell you why, I
don’t know if I should tell you thou. XOXO Roar.' She sent the message, about 2 minutes
later he texted back, 'It just makes you even more awesome! Haha it’s ok. I promise I
won’t laugh. ust tell me. XXX.' 'Was I really going to tell my best friend that I was in love
with him. Eh it’s so fucking cliché. Girl falls for best friend. Best friend admits he’s always
loved her. He breaks up with his girlfriend and goes out with her. Ha! Yea right, how can he
love me and even if he did and I’m pretty damn sure he wouldn’t leave his girlfriend for me,
she everything and I’m nothing,'she thought looking in the mirror. 'This could be very
good or very very bad. But I’ll never know if I don't try.'She sighed starting to text him back
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{Viktoria-16 Axel-13}Second chapter.
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