When the Moon Fell in Love With the Sun

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For RainBow BalLooN's 'Can You Write One From?' Contest.

Song: When The Day Met The Night.
Feat. Gabe Saporta.
Words: 1595

This is my first entry to a contest that I have posted. I like it but that's maybe just me.
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When the moon found the sun
He looked like he was barely hanging on
But her eyes saved his life
In the middle of summer.

In the middle of summer,
All was golden in the sky,
All was golden when the day met the night.
  1. The one and only
    ...looking at the sky as the day started to meet the night.