Status: First draft!! ANYONE GIVE SUGGESTIONS AND CORRECTIONS

Maro and Portina

So this story was a short myth I had to write for a Classical Lit. class. I kinda went farther than expected and I'm proud of it being a first draft. Yes, the characters are derived from Dante's Inferno and no, I'm not a furry.
  1. Maro And Portina
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