Blutrache Manor

This is a story for the comp that I was originally entering 'The Man On the Porch' into. The deadline's in two days, so I was in an editing block regarding that story. SO I STARTED A NEW ONE!!! *is happy* I don't have enough time to get criticism and whatnot, so I wont be editing it any further, but feedback is welcome anyways cuz I'm always looking to better my writing.

SO PEOPLE WILL STOP ASKING ME:
The comp is NOT in fact a Mibba comp, so it doesn't have a theme. It's just a comp some dudes are holding so Aussie high-school kids are encouraged to express themselves. (rofl)