To Forgive Is Divine, but I’m Not That Type

What would you do if you were being abused by your father, and you had an older brother who didn't believe you when you told him? Well, in this story, To forgive is divine, but I'm not that type, by my friend Marshmallow Jam on FanFiction.Net, a girl named Roxy Johnson decides to take off and find some new prospects somewhere else — namely, Santa Carla, California.

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Meet Roxy
Roxy is introduced.
SATs: Self-Absorbed Tarts
Roxy runs away after a fight with a popular girl.
How I Came to Santa Carla
Roxy tells of one day while in Santa Carla.
Meeting Marko Again
Roxy meets Marko again, and goes to the cave where the boys are...
Roxy’s Got Some Fangs
Roxy realizes that something has happened to her — something different..
Laddie’s Escape
Paul helps his little brother Laddie escape from an unhappy home with a drugged-up mother.
Boardwalk Blubber and a New Pack Brother
Laddie discovers that Roxy, Marko, Paul, Dwayne and David are vampires, and is sired by Paul as a half-vampire.