To Forgive Is Divine, but I’m Not That Type - Comments

Marko'sGirl:

This is absolutely, utterly, fantabulously amazing. Let me tell you something: Im turning 12 on the 28th of this month, and I am completely obsessed with The Lost Boys. I have a wall dedicated to every one of them. And this story is my absolute, utter favourite. Its completely amazing and I am so obsessed with Marko, and you've captured his every detaiil and.....well, lets just say, I can relate to Roxy's abuse. Keep up the amazing writing!

Thanks! :) That means a lot to me, too. :)

This is absolutely, utterly, fantabulously amazing. Let me tell you something: Im turning 12 on the 28th of this month, and I am completely obsessed with The Lost Boys. I have a wall dedicated to every one of them. And this story is my absolute, utter favourite. Its completely amazing and I am so obsessed with Marko, and you've captured his every detaiil and.....well, lets just say, I can relate to Roxy's abuse. Keep up the amazing writing!

I've only read the first chapter, so I don't know if I can critique too much, but it doesn't seem likely that an abused girl would yell at her abusive father.

However, I like that she's running away. THAT seems realistic.

I love the Lost Boys, I have yet to see any FFs on this amazing movie!

Your story sounds interesting, I'll give it a read :)

Aww haha no need to hun I just love this story so much!! :3

<3

~Meg

I read this on FF.net but I loved it so much I'm reading it again!!! <3
Yay!

i love your story, though you need to make the chapters longer. Roxy's family was introduced too quickly and if the main reason of her running away is her father's abuse, then you should have flashbacks of all the bad things he did to her. (not that i like abuse in any way). Your story is set up to be absolutely amazing and i cant wait to read about her changing into a vampire. I will tell everyone about your story