Status: trying this out, Comments?

Adopted by A7x? What?!?

Chapter 1

"I’m what!" i scream at Ms Fields, the owner of the orphanage
Let me just rewind a little.
I rub my eyes as i awake, looking at the small clock on my dresser, i realise that it was 11am and that i had slept in. Rolling out of bed i walk to the bathroom, jumping in the shower quickly. By 11:30 I’m dressed walk downstairs where the younger kids are watching TV and playing their games.

"Aimee" Ms Fields shouts to me
"Yeah? You old hag" i murmur the last bit but hear a deep chuckles behind me
Slowly i turn around to come face to face with Matt Sanders or M.Shadows from A7X and his wife Val, my eyes turn big as i realise who is standing before me.
"erm what the fuck" i ask myself before pinching myself to see if i was dreaming
Matt just smiles at me as Ms Fields enters the room.

"Ohh how lovely, i see you've met Aimee here." speaking in her annoying voice
I look confused as i look at the happy couple. So i decide to speak up
" so what are you doing here" i question them, Ms Fields opens her mouth to speak but is cut of by Matt, "Well you see, Me and Val want to adopt you"

His words sink in and i come back down to earth, "why would you want to adopt me, i mean why not a little kid?" this time Val smiles, and speaks. "Well with Matt on tour a lot, we thought it would be hard for a child, so we thought why not a teen? And from the looks of it you would fit in pretty well with us”? She says looking hopeful

Woahh is all think to myself,” just smile and accept Aimee, who else is going to want you”? I tell myself. I nod my head as Val shrieks and launches herself at me and matt give me a side hug. I can tell Ms Fields is happy to get rid of me, Bitch.

So I’m new to this, want to tell me what you think of this so far?